Thursday, January 29, 2009

Taron ki chamak main

Taron ki chamak main dhoondu main tumhe
Chand ki chandni main dhoondu main tumhe

Pyar ke rango se raang di hai meri zindagi
Har pal har khushi main dhoondu main tumhe

Pyar se dil ke har ek kone main aise basa loon
Khushion ke har ek raang se sajha doon tumhe

Baas jaoun tere dil aur demaag main youn aur
Reshaam se nazuk dor main baandh loon tumhe

Na jaa paoge duur phir kabhi bhi tum mujhse
Aise aapne rab se maanga hai meri jaan tumhe
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6 comments:

  1. Manish KumarJanuary 30, 2009 at 4:20 AM

    achchha prayas hai likte rahein

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  2. Science Bloggers AssociationFebruary 1, 2009 at 11:44 PM

    सुन्‍दर गजल। लेकिन अगर देवनागरी लिपि में होती, तो ज्‍यादा मजा आता।

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  3. hem pandeyFebruary 9, 2009 at 8:19 AM

    ज़ाकिर अली 'रजनीश' की टिप्पणि को दोहराता हूँ.

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  4. daanishFebruary 10, 2009 at 9:21 PM

    "naa ja paaoge duur phir kabhi ,
    aise apne rb se maanga hai..."

    ek kaamyaab izhaar....
    ek achhi rachna ......
    aur...Zakirji aur Hemji ki baat ka anumodan bhi
    badhaaee svikaarein . . . .
    ---MUFLIS---

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  5. Atul SharmaFebruary 11, 2009 at 2:13 AM

    Very Good Poem.
    Keep it up.
    Would like to see more poems
    Sundar Gazarl. Lekin agar hindi fonts
    use kiye hote to aur bhi sundar hoti.
    naa ja paaoge duur phir kabhi ,
    aise apne rb se maanga hai..."

    ek kaamyaab izhaar....
    ek achhi rachna ......
    aur...Zakirji aur Hemji ki baat ka anumodan bhi
    badhaaee svikaarein . . . .
    LAJAWAAB
    BEHAD LAJAWAAB.
    THANKYOU.

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  6. saloniFebruary 11, 2009 at 7:42 AM

    waah,kya baat hai.bahut sundar.

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